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Adam Gavriely
is on page 139 of 442
Best chapter so far (chapter 10).
Battle was written so immersingly and clearly. A character died which added to the feel of stakes.
Was on the verge of tears.
Might still be written a bit amaturely but definetly was less felt now and immersed me in the story to whole new level.
Also very fast paced so far and I am loving it.
So far:
4/5
Worldbuilding: 3.5/5
Characters: 5/5
Plot: 4.5/5
Prose: 2.5/5
— Apr 16, 2026 12:44AM
Battle was written so immersingly and clearly. A character died which added to the feel of stakes.
Was on the verge of tears.
Might still be written a bit amaturely but definetly was less felt now and immersed me in the story to whole new level.
Also very fast paced so far and I am loving it.
So far:
4/5
Worldbuilding: 3.5/5
Characters: 5/5
Plot: 4.5/5
Prose: 2.5/5
Adam Gavriely
is on page 83 of 442
3.5/5
Worldbuilding: 3/5
Characters: 4.5/5
Plot: 4/5
Prose: 3/5
— Apr 07, 2026 12:35PM
Worldbuilding: 3/5
Characters: 4.5/5
Plot: 4/5
Prose: 3/5
