Carole at From My Carolina Home’s Reviews > Our Family Quilt: The Fabric of Life > Status Update

So far it reads like what it is, an unedited, self published novel by a first time author. The blank lines between the sentences chops up the story. There is little in the way of imagery, for example, the characters go hiking and come upon a lake. Just a lake, no description at all. The storyline jumps from one subject to another. The voice of the teenager sounds like she is 30 years old. Hoping for improvement