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new characters at this point? i feel i do not care

okay so everyone is a liar?

all telling, no showing

called it!

they clearly love each other. they aren't fooling anyone. this is stupid.

why is hades being mentioned so much? they are british??

she wasn't really made out to be that untrustworthy? i'm not getting this plot line ngl

"the smell hadn't tickled her nose in years." what on earth 😭

some of this dialogue is weird. . .some phrases are not things that people would actually say and sounds like it should have stayed in the narration or smth

the way this conversation is going is just absolutely ridiculous