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Rachel is 57% done
Mahon goes home, scout along the way. Keegan told his mom about Shana. She states the obvious- she sucks; be careful. Course she also knows he is a dumb man. Shana does what ever the fuck w her idiot man, then tries to lie to Keegan about Breen. He regrets messing w her, but again, idiot. Breen and Marco go to the village. Meet a witch who knew Marg. Warned her about Shana, I think, but not in many words.
Apr 08, 2026 04:47PM
The Becoming (The Dragon Heart Legacy, #2)

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Rachel
Rachel is finished
In his room w him. Skip the epi. Ordan. Shana is pg. Ew. He gave Yesult pain but she still lived.
Onto the last one.
5 hours, 40 min ago
The Becoming (The Dragon Heart Legacy, #2)


Rachel
Rachel is finished
Says Eian would be proud. Been felt the love. lol Marco rode w Brian. He gathered ppl from the Valley. She hugged and cried. Morena lost one of her bros. They discuss it all. How Ordan is a coward. He can't come through yet. Not enough power. Breen is determined to win. To stop him. To train her butt off. To stay and help. He says things to her in his language. He loves her? There a lot of things to do. Stay in his
5 hours, 42 min ago
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Rachel
Rachel is 95% done
She saw the tree changed. Then swayed. On the other side w him. Her father's blood sealed it. Hers will open it. He cut her. She tells Keegan it's go time. She froze a bit, then fought. Loren saved her by taking the knife by Shana. He died. Then Yesult comes. Lies about death. Breen fights back and hurts Yesult. More fight. Morena, Marco and Harken arrive to help. Then Marg helped Breen seal the portal. Tarryn
5 hours, 53 min ago
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Rachel
Rachel is 93% done
Then Ordan showed up and said they all dead. U did nada. She ran. She woke up, checked the Capital, woke up Marco. Called dragon, took doggie. She had to get to the Capital. He was coming. Keegan and Tarryn were discussing Breen when he caught sight. Annoyed at first. Til she explained, then took him to find the tree. She says the tree is masked. Ordan needed more power to open it. Had dad. Not anymore. Others come
6 hours, 0 min ago
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Rachel
Rachel is 92% done
To need to come soon. Keegan helped for a bit, then moved on. Finally spends a lil time w Harken. He will hold down the fort. Morena cole in and Harken proposed. They want to get married in the spring. Keegan chats briefly w Mahon. The memorial is up. Keegan asked a elf to come be on the council. Breen finished her book. Morena comes w her news. They will stavd w her. Breen dreams of Keegan, but not. Sees the tree.
6 hours, 7 min ago
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Rachel
Rachel is 88% done
Morena has dinner w Breen and Marco. Later, Brian comes. Sally Facetimes w Breen. She hired a girl from Ireland. Hmmm....
They chat about Marco, Brian, Breen being happy, Keegan. Who is that girl? Keegan stays. Still wrestling w hos feelings and duty. She gets that. But caring is a strength. He goes to the Capital. Tarryn helped Shana's parents leave. Loren wants to help look for the portals. Tarryn thinks Breen is
6 hours, 19 min ago
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Rachel
Rachel is 86% done
She saw Yesult. Death. Felt that Ordan saw her. Meeting. Shana knows where other portals are cos her dad told her, even tho he was sworn not too. So her parents will be removed from the Capital. Keegan knows, cos, boss. Sedric magic knows. They oath that they won't reveal the portals. Two are dark. One unknown. Ordan wandered for centuries before getting out of the dark world. Marg and Sedric will go look. Snake tree
6 hours, 33 min ago
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Rachel
Rachel is 83% done
Brian is in love and wants to be w Marco. Skipped Shana and Ordan. Gross.
Keegan left before Breen could relay her dreams of Shana and Ordan. She doesn't know it yet. Brian straight out tells Breen that he loves Marco and wants a life w him. He will have his family along w her, Sally)Derrick and Marco's sister. They split up in Talamh. She goes w her dragon and dog to the portal. Pulled there. She saw blood and deat
6 hours, 51 min ago
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Rachel
Rachel is 73% done
And Marg fly to the waterfalls. Mahon, Asiling, Morena, Harken, Sedric wait. Breen had her clothes stripped by Keegan and in they went. Closed the breach. She punched him. Goes to Ireland. They explain themselves. Then sleep. Separate. She gets a lil tispy w Marg, Fionla, Morena and Aisling. Marco and Brian will spend time at the cottage. Keegan takes her to meet her dragon. It was time. Marco is wary of them lol.
Apr 11, 2026 03:53PM
The Becoming (The Dragon Heart Legacy, #2)


Rachel
Rachel is 73% done
Breen fills Marco In on what happened. They find Keegan and Bollocks in the training field. He leaves so they can do hand to hand and archery w two dudes. Shana is still out there, being skipable. Keegan went to get Marg. Shana hurt a boy and stole his clothes, and his horse. Took off. They want to a spell to find her. I think Yesult got her. Loren was apart of the circle along w Marco. Breen saw the breach. So BK
Apr 11, 2026 03:37PM
The Becoming (The Dragon Heart Legacy, #2)


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