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Marble
is 80% done
The story finally began to flow at chapter 11. Almost like a different author in ch 11 & 12. Almost done with the book and frustrated. still unable to root for Hero or heroine.
— Mar 10, 2017 09:34AM
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Marble
is 45% done
Story improving. However.-Writing is disjointed.
So. Much. Angst. in storyline
— Mar 10, 2017 08:20AM
So. Much. Angst. in storyline
Marble
is 22% done
Almost 1/4 into book and lacking an interesting "destination" location. unclear character ties confusing backstory depressing w/ angst
Atypical writing of this series.
— Mar 10, 2017 07:36AM
Atypical writing of this series.
