Mai’s Reviews > Bitten and Bound: The Complete Trilogy > Status Update
Mai
is 15% done
DNF 15%
I'm sad. This had so much potential, between the characters and the world-building.
It was a good beginning and, suddenly, at 11% everything turned... weird? I don't know. I didn’t like how the sex scenes were written between the MMCs, and the FMC behavior felt weird.
A review said that this story needs to be rewritten by someone who can fix all its flaws, and I couldn’t agree more.
— Apr 14, 2026 03:04PM
I'm sad. This had so much potential, between the characters and the world-building.
It was a good beginning and, suddenly, at 11% everything turned... weird? I don't know. I didn’t like how the sex scenes were written between the MMCs, and the FMC behavior felt weird.
A review said that this story needs to be rewritten by someone who can fix all its flaws, and I couldn’t agree more.
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Mai
is 10% done
It's giving me a mix of feathers so vicious and a deal with the elf king vibes, but I'm enjoying it, so no complaints for now
— Apr 14, 2026 12:58PM