East’s Reviews > Swordheart > Status Update

i’m trying so hard to like it and i just can’t. i had the same issue with fruit of the flesh, it’s like it has the skeleton of a good story but its flesh is made of dogshit. it could’ve been so good and yet it’s not :(

alr so we’ve already had a piss jar scene

bit of a jump since the last time i updated lmao. anyways. pacing isn’t great. it’s gotten plenty better, but it still seems pretty damn rushed. guy is slightly obnoxious, girly is kind of stupid but she’s girlypop so it’s cool