Veronica’s Reviews > Midnight Shadows > Status Update

I like the little plot twist of marsh and Walker wearing vests to survive. When marsh was shot I even said to myself "you'd think he would have worn a bullet proof vest!" That's probably been my favorite scene this novel. Everything else feels like we're going in circles.

Sabrina's secret that she has been holding for nineteen years - and all novel - was weak. I get the guilt factor but come on, I thought she assisted somehow in her parents murder, knew it wasn't a murder suicide, etc. Yes, never leave loved ones angry - always say I love you. But that guilt she carried around... mentally there is something wrong with Sabrina. She should see a councilor.

Whatever this secret Sabrina is holding onto should have been revealed by now. I don't like when authors tease something and it lingers literally throughout the novel. Just tell the reader so they know, you can drop it on the other characters later. OR not let us know there was a secret until the drop.

This one has been a little bit more slow and boring for me. Which stinks because I was most excited for Sabrina. I find myself just wanted to read to finish and move onto a new book/series.

It has action but also drags with the struggles between Sabrina and Ian. I guess after the same structure and dynamics and plot lines of the other two novels, this is ind of redundant.