Danyelle’s Reviews > Pumpkin Spice & Everything Nice > Status Update

I am on chapter 4. The author has done this twice. When Lucy comes into the back room to get something then she comes back out with pitchers in her arms. She sees her crush, Jack standing at the counter. She starts talking with Jack and pitchers seem to disappear in her arms. Later in the chapter, the author does it again. This time with paper towels. Normally, I don’t see any errors like this.

A great book so far. On chapter 4.