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Tala
is 31% done
Still haven't found anything to pull me into the story enough. Feels more aimed at youth rather than adult audiences based on the writing style and seems very twlighty. There is a lot of telling rather than showing for characters emotions etc
— Apr 18, 2026 02:16AM
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Tala
is 18% done
So far just can't get into it, the writing style feels typical and over done. Also feels a tad predictable, from this far in I think I can tell you who the romance will be with.
— Apr 16, 2026 07:45PM
