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I love J.A. Jance. But her grasp of time lines hurts the head.
Not done yet, but chapter 26 has a weird time warp. Pregnant during funeral. See said baby at 4 years. Person dies one year after said funeral but wasn't made aware of 4 yo because not stable. It doesn't math. All in the span of a few paragraphs.
This isn't the first time and I'm sure it won't be the this was by far the worst time wormhole she wrote.
— Apr 18, 2026 07:33AM
Not done yet, but chapter 26 has a weird time warp. Pregnant during funeral. See said baby at 4 years. Person dies one year after said funeral but wasn't made aware of 4 yo because not stable. It doesn't math. All in the span of a few paragraphs.
This isn't the first time and I'm sure it won't be the this was by far the worst time wormhole she wrote.
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