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I’ve spotted some hints about a potential romantic connection between Matilda and Alfie and I honestly am not very thrilled about it… At this point I’d rather they have a platonic connection.
— Apr 19, 2026 12:05PM
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Apr 19, 2026 12:05PM
Also, there’s way too much clothing description. I don’t need to know what a character is wearing every single time they are mentioned. If the clothes are important to the plot or the character, by no means. But from what I’ve seen most of the descriptions haven’t contributed anything meaningful to the plot other than just being there taking up the word count. In addition to this, the dialogues and the monologues feel quite… generic. Unnatural. Not like something a person would say out loud or to another person.
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