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Very enjoyable writing. BUT it has the one thing I hate and that is time line jumping.
— Apr 20, 2026 04:50AM
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Different style of writing than I am used to. Just finished part 2. Reminds me of an older style of writing.
— Apr 27, 2026 10:05AM
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Apr 20, 2026 07:01AM
Some authors and/or stories do this so much better than others. If it makes it makes the story confusing for me to follow along with, it is a big deterrent for me.
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I agree Marta, so far I am able to follow it. BUT it takes me out of the moment to recall what the other storyline is about.