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Elizabeth
is on page 103 of 306
ive only read a bit more from my last note but Aila, Jack and the rest of the troupe have all met now, and its very rushed. weve rushed into them immediately feeling very close and it feels like we skipped actual bonding scenes, and just get informed that this felt important and they’re connected now.
It’s all very ‘tell don’t show’ and that’s been fairly indicative of the weak writing in this book so far.
— Apr 20, 2026 08:16AM
It’s all very ‘tell don’t show’ and that’s been fairly indicative of the weak writing in this book so far.
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is on page 92 of 306
so far the writing is a bit clunky and a lot of Aila’s POV feels like it’s going back and forth between a bullet point list of events and a couple paragraphs for the author to show off how much specific research he’s done.
we’ve had a lot of “like most people in the highlands…” and then a fun fact you might read on a plaque in a museum
— Apr 18, 2026 10:57AM
we’ve had a lot of “like most people in the highlands…” and then a fun fact you might read on a plaque in a museum