Nicole Prado-Carr’s Reviews > Barcode: Legend of Apollo > Status Update
Nicole Prado-Carr
is 3% done
Ok so far this is a freakin great idea and plot. I just wish that it was edited better. It doesn't have grammatical errors but the continuity is flawed. It jumps around and leaves loose ends everywhere. It's annoying when you're trying to get into a new world
— Mar 18, 2017 12:18AM
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Nicole Prado-Carr
is 58% done
It kills me that the writing is so bad. The transitions between one scene to the next hardly exist. The cuts between characters speaking are not in correct spaces
or order. The story is so good and has so much potential and you can tell that the author created a complete complex world but didn't give much thought to the writing and that kills me. It has such promise but overwhelmed with problems
— Mar 24, 2017 12:55AM
or order. The story is so good and has so much potential and you can tell that the author created a complete complex world but didn't give much thought to the writing and that kills me. It has such promise but overwhelmed with problems
