Jason Ashmore’s Reviews > GROUP 7: Eclipse Division: The Origin > Status Update

The days in and I'm not sure I can go much further! The writing is bland and verbose: every tiny detail is explained immediately, some concepts have taken over a page. Nothing is left for the reader to discover or work through for themself.

And the mistakes:grammatical and spelling... My goodness! I recognise that a few will get past even the best editors, but there are so many: three or four on most pages!