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🙄😒 she hissed at him like an idiot and narrated every single thing that happened

I feel like her reaction is very underplayed and described with nothing. Like the writer is giving up toward the end of the mf book and it’s annoying.

I’m very annoyed with how much dialogue is in this book. They talk a whole lot of nothing ngl. I’m so mindless when I read this book 📕 I have no thoughts and I can only recall how annoying they all are

I can’t get over how much dialogue is in this mf book. It’s very distracting from the lack of substance in this fuckery

Let me say, that was the most.. lazy writer-esque s3x scene ever. Everything was so surface level and this was supposed to be a big moment for them? What the fuck happened man?

I liked it better when they didn’t touch each other at all. I’m picturing very cringey movements and stuff in my head and it’s really hurting my brain because gorl, what do you mean she beckoned to him with raised hips while laying down?

I love how the author told me, in 3 different ways in the same fucking paragraph, that Theon takes power from his guardian when he can’t siphon from Tessa

Trystyn? Idk how to spell his stupid Gen Alpha name. But he knows something about Tessa? He’s been out at other realms so he knows sumfin lol 🤣 Mr Cryptic.

Tentacle 🌽 disguised as darkness 🌽?

Umm.. is Tessa going to be interesting now? Please start being cool. They put a tracking curse on her or something. And now they’re waiting for her to come out with some sort of reaction. Fun.

Honestly, that was good to see a different side to her because.. Tessa isn’t a good character at all. She’s irritating but to see this other side of her was refreshing. Nice. I didn’t see much interaction between her and her friends.. except the first three chapters? Possibly less? My memory is shit.