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Honestly, in my opinion, it lacks tension, probably because we already know who the traitor is. It would’ve been more exciting if we didn’t know who it was or like it wasn’t explicitly implied by the traitor that traitor siya sa pov niya.

lowk dragging siya.. and i noticed that the author likes to describe the appearance of a single character in multiple povs. it’s nice sana but it would’ve been bomb if different ang pagkadescribe ng each person on that one character.

I would’ve expected more build up and tension at this point but i feel like it’s lacking.. BUT STILL PATIENCE IS A VIRTUE I CAN’T WAIT GENUINELY

heheheh loving it so far (i cant wait for more political intrigue)

ooohh.. i’ve watched the movie ver first and i didn’t expect sa second chap palang meron na si feyd lol HAHAHA but like i like this better..