Julia DiLorenzo’s Reviews > The Shadowglass > Status Update

FINALLY SOME GOOD FOOD! That almost made me tear up

Yo. Who is this guy? How ooc can he get??

King WHO? That’s a typo

Gotta go back here for the quote (286)

Uh ohhhhh. Tea’s sounding like a Mary Sue with her being one of the four to ever pass two trials

So that’s twice now that Tea has done a trial wrong, thought she failed, and actually passed. Ok…

Well THAT was blatant foreshadowing of what already happened

Aww they liked her

Gripe #837: So, with all this talk of her having killed an innocent, with Fox not talking to her and all that, it’s been revealed. BUT! It’s been established several times that there are ways to compel people AND Tea even JUST SAID she’s been having bad visions. AND she’s been compelled before and almost killed Mykkie. Like??? The entire reason Fox resents her doesn’t work???

This right here shows one of my gripes. There’s been like zero description and all of a sudden she’s grabbing Kalen’s hand. Like??? Why not establish he was there a page ago?? It only showed Mykkie and Parmina and kinda Zoya