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we've been in evangeline's head multiple times before this revelation became known to everyone and there was no mention at all of her knowing anything about alice's heritage soooooooooo

i don't think this reveal works entirely considering we've been in evangeline's pov. we know she's been figuring this stuff out. how the hell did she come to this conclusion and we as the audience didn't know that???

B E G G I N G this author to stop using the word "however"

“do you know what the preservation room is for?”

“delicious jams and jellies?”

“we need to sneak into faerie during the midsummer celebration to steal the fountainheads”

it’s really giving “sneaking into the national archives during the gala to steal the declaration of independence”