Rai (is hard to please)’s Reviews > The Courting of Bristol Keats > Status Update

Bristol, I need you to stay angrier for longer

I hate that we’re trying to lessen the blow of how messed up this all is by rendering Tyghan pitiful, just so Bristol has to feel bad for him

Tyghan has not demonstrated an ounce of consideration for the position Bristol’s dad was in and how they both did brash, but understandable things that got out of hand
And yet
Bristol is already starting to soften towards him
Ugh

Hundred of pages of gassing Bristol up as a sharp, silver-tongued woman of conviction

And it took this long for me to start buying into it

They’re confessing their undying love for each other and I keep muttering “ew” under my breath

how has nothing interesting happened yet
how are bristol and tyghan SO dull
WHY do we keep adding new povs for two pages of content that could’ve been provided by another established mouthpiece
WHY ARE WE CONSTANTLY GASSING BRISTOL UP AND PRETENDING WE’RE NOT