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I love this series but so far this sequel feels kind of disorganized. Skipping years, randomly inserting characters in conversations without any previous mention of them being even in the room/scene. Also some major typos (pg. 63 the word “secret” is spelled “seceret.”
Needs better editing
— 4 hours, 37 min ago
Needs better editing

