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The Jasmine Throne (The Burning Kingdoms, #1)

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Lee Kirby
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Enjoying this a lot more after a break. Sometimes that's what it takes I guess!
May 05, 2026 01:11PM
The Jasmine Throne (The Burning Kingdoms, #1)


Lee Kirby
Lee Kirby is 14% done
Prose is still really rough but I'm compelled as hell
Mar 11, 2026 07:09PM
The Jasmine Throne (The Burning Kingdoms, #1)


Lee Kirby
Lee Kirby is 10% done
I'm enjoying this but I'm frustrated by some of the juvenile prose throughout - Suri has a great voice during scene description but the careful prose just kind of fades away during character interactions or internal narration. I know this is a trilogy, so I'm hoping there'll be significant growth there (although I know it's just as likely that a brisk publishing schedule will erase what complexity there already is)
Mar 09, 2026 09:32PM
The Jasmine Throne (The Burning Kingdoms, #1)


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