Lee Kirby’s Reviews > The Jasmine Throne > Status Update

Enjoying this a lot more after a break. Sometimes that's what it takes I guess!

Prose is still really rough but I'm compelled as hell

I'm enjoying this but I'm frustrated by some of the juvenile prose throughout - Suri has a great voice during scene description but the careful prose just kind of fades away during character interactions or internal narration. I know this is a trilogy, so I'm hoping there'll be significant growth there (although I know it's just as likely that a brisk publishing schedule will erase what complexity there already is)