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Story is so predictable. Not another DNF 😮‍💨

‘“There is a belief among the men of our land that the fire only presents itself for a girl who has remained untouched. I can see that you have,” the mamakuna said, her eyes glittering like two blocks of burning coal. “And I am sure you can see why this must remain between us.”’

Only virgins

“The appearance of the white man was foretold to my father many years ago....”

Oh

“Nina said nothing in return, but the way her eyes shifted between his, soft with seeking at first, then hard with determination, exposed her every thought.

Who are you? her tear-stained eyes said.

Why have I ever trusted you? her quivering lips said.

I loathe you, her body said.”

Girl you just met him like TWO days ago???

“...You are Ikara. The true chosen one.”

As opposed to a false chosen one??

“But the truth was, within his arms and against the solid pillar of him, she felt safer than she had since leaving home.”

Wait is this a romantasy 😐

“You are not particularly beautiful. You cannot sew. You cannot obey. What use are you to anyone?”

It's me