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Gregisdead121
is on page 124 of 208
"Kids who come back " is the best story in this entire collection so far. 5/5 stars for that story
— 6 hours, 23 min ago
Gregisdead121
is on page 91 of 208
"There were many Jessicas, because most of the missing kids were
teenage girls. They took off with an older guy, or got scared by a pregnancy.
They fled from a drunken father, from a stepfather who raped them, a brother who masturbated onto their backs at night.And the ones who were taken, the kidnapped girls who
disappeared in prostitution rings, to resurface dead, "
— May 12, 2026 07:44AM
teenage girls. They took off with an older guy, or got scared by a pregnancy.
They fled from a drunken father, from a stepfather who raped them, a brother who masturbated onto their backs at night.And the ones who were taken, the kidnapped girls who
disappeared in prostitution rings, to resurface dead, "
Gregisdead121
is on page 47 of 208
Mixed bag so far leaning more on the good side. Dark ambiguous contemporary fairy-tales that dwell on the macabre and quotidian to deliver its thrills. The point of views do tend to feel recycled, the author is great at telling a story (relaying a scene) but less convincing at forming characters that are distinct or narrative voices that don't feel the same which can threaten a story collection like this.
— May 10, 2026 10:59AM

