Allyson’s Reviews > The Salt Grows Heavy > Status Update
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is 70% done
What started as an interesting, alien POV became swiftly overburdened by the prose, which is somehow both archaic and anachronistic. Also why does a mermaid have such a broad and clinical understanding of human anatomy? I am an anatomist and could not define half the jargon narrator uses!!! Takes me out of the story every time
— May 10, 2026 04:03PM
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