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Omg this is so bad. I’m struggling. Wayyyyy too much “telling” instead of showing; the dialogue is unnatural and cringe and the MMC has seemingly no redeeming qualities and FMCs inner thoughts have been on the same loop for the entire book. I’m tired.
May 11, 2026 07:48PM
Bound by Lies (Fatal Alliances #1)

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