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" A "belt and suspenders man" is a person so cautious he uses two means to accomplish something when one is sufficient. He's redundant. Well, written redundancies do the same thing. All add fog and should be eliminated."
— Mar 27, 2017 07:59AM
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Salem Lorot
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"Use your word processor's search function to find these giveaway words: arrive, make, place, put, and take. Be suspicious of words ending in "-ion" or "-tion," since they could be foggy-phrase giveaways."
— Mar 26, 2017 11:32PM