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is 91% done
1. Would be great as a movie I can see the vision
2. Started off great, ended up boring (imo)
3. I find the inner monologues goofy and cringe
4. Great concept, subpar execution
5. Endless meandering without very strong emotional conclusions (imo)
6. The character diversity feels so pushed
— 8 hours, 56 min ago
2. Started off great, ended up boring (imo)
3. I find the inner monologues goofy and cringe
4. Great concept, subpar execution
5. Endless meandering without very strong emotional conclusions (imo)
6. The character diversity feels so pushed
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7. Music knowledge that is peppered throughout the entire narrative apparently isn’t a sufficient secondary attribute to add colors to the plot.
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