Araxie’s Reviews > Unsteady > Status Update

SHUT THE FRONT DOOR!!!

Almost 40% and…
This book has a story with potential, but the writing style keeps pulling me out..
the FMC’s inner narration is cringy, inconsistent, and emotional out of sync with what’s happening, so instead of tension i feel second hand embarrassment.

I’m bored at this point

‘I want to kiss him, like some school girl who’s had her virtue protected, like he’s some knight in shining armor.’
LMAO GIRL STFU GET UR ASS OUT OF HERE
I want to know what’s happening with the writing godd wtf is this

DID SHE JUST THOUGHT ABOUT THAT WHILE THE LOVE INTEREST IS TRYING TO PROTECT HER FROM THIS GUY SEAN !.!.!!.
‘hating that a part of me still wants to grab Sean by the hand and lead him into the now-vacant bathroom, let him slip into my body while I close my eyes and only think of Rhys.’
NO FUCKING WAY IM SO PISSED OFF !

he asked her if she wanted him to stay. and thats what she say “I’d like to see your stamina when you’re not fresh off an adrenaline high crash.”
girl SHUT THE FUCK UP that’s CRINGE

the fmc started to piss me off ..

God forbid a girl has 5 current reads and 2 exams in a month