KByoo’s Reviews > Iris Kelly Doesn't Date > Status Update

I look forward to Blake’s growth as a writer but I have to give her her flowers in how she gives her characters very compelling back stories that I can almost always get into if not emphatically relate to.

I wish I could replace the editor for Blake’s books. It’s getting to me now. One chapter ends with a character running to get lunch because it was past lunchtime (afternoon implied here). Only for the next chapter to pick up in their absence but it’s suddenly morning (“mornings breeze description). This editor is sleeping on the job! Put me in coach!