Sarah Collins’s Reviews > The Amendments > Status Update

I was confused on whether this writing style was intentional but now I think it might just be poor writing. I wish it was a lot more showing not telling. It feels very lecturey and then it remembers that it’s supposed to be a character and gets vague again. Idk. It’s a pity because it’s a really interesting premise with really important ideas. Just could do with a bit more subtlety :P