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When is to much inner dialog to much inner dialog 🥲 Like sometimes even though they seem to be in an active conversation between each sentence said we got nearly 2 pages inner dialog from either one of the MCs 😬 Sad because it looked so promising and even the summary sounded great. I‘m speed reading through this because I ain‘t read all that, sometimes I‘m just like ‚I don‘t care what you think‘
— May 14, 2026 01:49AM

