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Pisces51
Pisces51 is 60% done
The story details after the 50% mark reflect the unimaginable creative and chilling violence unleashed on the unsuspecting pregnant wife who was moonlighting with carpet cleaner sales to help finance a baby with the husband she adores.The narrative at this point poses the question of whether the reader feels simply sad for the victim or wants to punch her in the remaining teeth for her unadulterated stupidity.
May 15, 2026 07:10PM
The Slob

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Pisces51
Pisces51 is 83% done
Read very little tonight but learned what was inside the barn. Vera gets some much needed inspiration and determination from Michael Jackson's "Beat It". AB nearly won the " I'm gonna make ya puke battle" with his vivid descriptive prose of an unimaginable series of assaults on Vera by The Slob . Plan to finish this often referenced novel of Beauregard's tomorrow night.
May 17, 2026 08:26PM
The Slob


Pisces51
Pisces51 is 60% done
At 60% our mercilessly beaten and disfigured protagonist Vera meets the brave and mutilated female victim confined with her. The skillful writing of AB effectively brings his characters, the environment, and the extreme horror into vivid technicolor in our mind's eye. "You are there" which is every writer's goal. This was an emotionally rewarding segment in that I
admired their lust for life and courage to fight.
May 16, 2026 08:42PM
The Slob


Pisces51
Pisces51 is 44% done
This selection from AB has been a WTR for a long time. The good hearted female protagonist is not only very likeable but admirable in so many ways. I stopped reading at the point in the storyline when she has driven farther out into the country to score a final sale...and meets The Slob . The writing is gripping and propels the reader forward effortlessly. The backstory endears us. She has walked into hell...
May 14, 2026 07:16PM
The Slob


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