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Flowers cradled in her arms… the same flowers Simon’s mother now weeps over, tears streaming like a fountain at her back..?
Beautiful lines, but where’d the fountain come from, I thought she was crying from her back, the way it was phrased. Just weird and stopped the progression. Tears streaming like a fountain, mirroring the square’s grand fountain behind her.
— May 16, 2026 07:20AM
Beautiful lines, but where’d the fountain come from, I thought she was crying from her back, the way it was phrased. Just weird and stopped the progression. Tears streaming like a fountain, mirroring the square’s grand fountain behind her.
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