Voyevoda’s Reviews > He Who Fights with Monsters > Status Update

27 times I had to read “insert character” said. I can not describe how badly this book needs editing. It’s so bad it’s becoming a chore to read. Not to mention the MC being a snarky, hypocritical ass-hat on top of it. This is like playing a video game and liking the supporting cast completely and wanting to throw the MC off the highest cliff.

This book is a 4 star book suffering from lack of editing and dropping it to 3 stars. Also, the constant droning on about the same political inequalities about every other chapter is getting quite tiresome.

All I can say is Aethon Vault did a cash grab with this one. Desperately needs editing, grammatical errors everywhere, and some weird printing choices leaving whole sentences without spacing.