Lien Marieke’s Reviews > Flight of the Dragon > Status Update

I don’t have enough respect for the mc to sit through this monologue (of her trying to defend herself to this crowd of morbidly stupid ppl?) (also this mc is far not smart enough to be allowed the smartest in the room, CUZ THAT’S ALWAYS HOW SHE OFFHANDEDLY COMES ACROSS AS? WHY DOES NO ONE HAVE 2 FUNCTIONING BRAINCELLS??)

These books are way too short for the mc to repeat what she’s gone through SO MANY TIMESSSS. (NOT EVEN 300 PAGES?!!, I’M NOT THAT DUMB??!) Also there are barely any details in these books anyways, so you’re just telling me the exact same thing as what happened before. Just proving these book don’t have enough depth, honestly;

This is so stupidly simple and predictable…

”paying with one of the Zallabarian coins in Jallis’ purse- apparently, he always carried a bit of currency from our neighbouring countries in his purse in case he found himself on a last-minute trip-“

AGAIN, HOW STUPIDLY ConVEnIeNT

The way the mc’s father-daughter relation with Salacombe is being handled rn isn’t just very convenient for the plot; it also makes the whole thing less appealing/interesting/believable…

Also tell me why the mc would say the most obvious thing about a situation, and someone else would react ‘you’re reasoning isn’t bad, I’ll have to tell this to more ppl’ (cuz no one has a general sense of conscious?