Jayson’s Reviews > There's a Wocket in My Pocket > Status Update
Jayson
is finished

Notes:
(1) A bare-bones creature show-and-tell,
Done rapid-fire and doesn't dwell.
- Just nonsense names (for rhyming lazy),
Hardly memorable nor crazy.
- More complex though (the rhyming scheme):
No basic couplet sound regime.
(2) The artwork here's real simple stuff.
- Not bad, but bland, and rather rough.
- And certainly no counterweight,
Feels lazy too, and second-rate.
— May 17, 2026 11:15PM

Notes:
(1) A bare-bones creature show-and-tell,
Done rapid-fire and doesn't dwell.
- Just nonsense names (for rhyming lazy),
Hardly memorable nor crazy.
- More complex though (the rhyming scheme):
No basic couplet sound regime.
(2) The artwork here's real simple stuff.
- Not bad, but bland, and rather rough.
- And certainly no counterweight,
Feels lazy too, and second-rate.
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