Jayson’s Reviews > Happy Birthday to You! > Status Update
Jayson
is finished

Notes:
(1) Looks simply luscious—all painterly goodness.
- Pulls weight, heavy lifting, dolls up the plot's woodness.
(2) Story-wise, hardly an intricate tale.
- Slideshow of spectacles, fun but gets stale.
- Real Peter Pan-y, a Neverland feel,
Albeit you age—re: birthday ideal.
- Picture book plotting, but rhyming's good stuff,
Detailed, descriptive and rarely reads rough.
— 9 hours, 40 min ago

Notes:
(1) Looks simply luscious—all painterly goodness.
- Pulls weight, heavy lifting, dolls up the plot's woodness.
(2) Story-wise, hardly an intricate tale.
- Slideshow of spectacles, fun but gets stale.
- Real Peter Pan-y, a Neverland feel,
Albeit you age—re: birthday ideal.
- Picture book plotting, but rhyming's good stuff,
Detailed, descriptive and rarely reads rough.
3 likes · Like flag

