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I've gotten used to the transitions between POVs, and the story is starting to get really exciting. I'm looking forward to how Jun and Keema will interact.
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The prose is very flowery, and it's a bit challenging to read at times, but the imagery evoked from the language itself feels alive. I'm interested to see where the story goes.
May 19, 2026 08:29PM
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