Bookcat’s Reviews > The Resurrectionist > Status Update

4 stars but man I had some issues, mostly the lack of vivid language and how repetitive some of the twists got

Also too much Ben

I've read quite a few novels with a similar plot and this one was the worst, but still decent

Eh good ending twist but it was still anticlimactic

Like you can't just infodump about this scar on the last page

....Filler character suddenly becomes important in the last 20 pages...

NO, BEN.

YOU SHOULD'VE GIVEN UP.

SHE DOESN'T WANT YOU.

YOU'RE EMBARRASSING YOURSELF.

Yayyyyy happiness

But why such a drastic mood shift

Bro now we have cringe villain motivations

And now there's too much Ben again like it gets boring when he has the same twist happen like 3 or 4 times

If anything the people in this book are REALLY good at covering things up

Okay I totally forgot arranged marriage was a thing but like it also says the guy who arranged it doesn't have actual power in the matter so it's still stupid

....Even in the 1800s, I'm pretty sure that's NOT how engagement works.

HOW DO YOU SCREW UP WRITING PEOPLE GETTING ENGAGED