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Okuta Otherside
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Have an unfinished ending, a lot of typos and weird choices words. Some sentences also kinda off when you read it. The tricks are simple, the villains kinda lack with the motive. The characters still have a lot potentials but in this story their characters didn't show their potentials at all. Sorry to say, this novel is fun to read when you have a spare time but don't ever think that this novel will satisfied you
— Apr 01, 2017 09:17AM
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The way author tell the story is really easy to understand, but i find some of words choices are kinda off in my opinion
— Mar 31, 2017 09:41AM
