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I’ve had to close this book every five pages because it sucks so bad what the actual hell who let this be published
May 21, 2026 07:25PM
Haunting Adeline (Cat and Mouse, #1)

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The only thing that I laughed at here was:
“The dude could give a fish a run for their money, they way he flops when he fucks.” (Pg20)
And that is only because it is so absurd. This novel is inundated with these kind of lines that Orwell couldn’t fathom:
“Now here I am, bent over and stuffing myself in a hole. Suppose if I couldn’t get mine stuffed tonight, I might as well get action this way.” KILL ME.
May 21, 2026 07:31PM
Haunting Adeline (Cat and Mouse, #1)


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