Ruby’s Reviews > The Spear Cuts Through Water > Status Update

Just too long now I’m bored

ITS MUCH BETTER. So much better when you actually understand what’s happening and things are explained

SO MUCH INFO AND NOT ENOUGH EXPLANATION!! The italics with different peoples point of views are driving me insane. Something gets brought up e.g the Bowl whatever that is and it doesn’t get explained until later which makes it SO HARD to follow