Phantom’s Reviews > Katzenjammer > Status Update

I feel like it’s kinda dragging in between memories and the present. And I guess yeah, that’s the point, to build suspense… But I’d prefer it if every memory was a chapter and then every ‘present’ was a chapter. That way it’d at least seem like the chapters weren’t dragging. I also don’t like how short the present is compared to the memories.

I’m getting a bit annoyed that at some parts there are no quotation marks and it gets a bit confusing when someone is talking and when someone isn’t.