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Max Mackay-Smith
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Already adoring this world building. Absolutely bizarre but so interesting.
Character dialogue feels a bit messy and some repetition here and there but otherwise enjoying this
— May 25, 2026 01:56PM
Character dialogue feels a bit messy and some repetition here and there but otherwise enjoying this
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Max Mackay-Smith
is on page 23 of 900
World building and themes? Loving it? The characters on their own? Already enjoying it.
But oh my god I’m sick of these repeated descriptions in the SAME CHAPTER. And also can Sheen be described normally and not as something every male character wants to fuck? I would like that even more thank you
— Jun 16, 2026 06:21AM
But oh my god I’m sick of these repeated descriptions in the SAME CHAPTER. And also can Sheen be described normally and not as something every male character wants to fuck? I would like that even more thank you