Ay’s Reviews > Alpha Awakened > Status Update

Its kinda getting boring... where is the action 😭

Im getting tired and annoyed by the whole push and pull thing they have going on... its always the same reasons too, we get it, its forbidden, then either stay to your word and stay away or figure out how to date >.< atleast the spice scenes are very nice

The writing style is... something ig, some parts are good but some are just annoying to read. Its like short sentences stacked on eachother "he did this. He did that." Etc and sometimes there are waaay too many details, idc what ortiz wore on a monday. But its still interesting and it seems like a slower burn and im liking how ice is slowly warming up to hazard 🥺