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Notes:
(1) Like "Fox in Socks," just not as fun,
Though tons of tough tongue twisters spun.
- All such random rhymes—most one-and-done,
And, personally, no real home runs.
- No book-long narrative nor story,
Just feels like excess inventory.
- Like "Fox in Socks" deleted scenes,
if fine enough and plenty keen.
(2) Overall, it does the job.
- This coming from a rhyming snob.
— May 27, 2026 12:40AM

Notes:
(1) Like "Fox in Socks," just not as fun,
Though tons of tough tongue twisters spun.
- All such random rhymes—most one-and-done,
And, personally, no real home runs.
- No book-long narrative nor story,
Just feels like excess inventory.
- Like "Fox in Socks" deleted scenes,
if fine enough and plenty keen.
(2) Overall, it does the job.
- This coming from a rhyming snob.
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