mieko’s Reviews > Into the Dark > Status Update

Starting to enjoy this a tiny bit more...took long enough... can't wait to see everything go to shit soon...can't wait for the book to be over and for me to switch to another author and better characters...however I am starting to like the rest of the cast a bit more. have always liked Reath though, let me be clear

Feeling like the most insane hater ever, but so much is happening for no reason. We're jumping from problem to problem without saying a *word*, there's no actual plot in sight, nothing is being given the time it deserves to make an impact, *and* the dialogue and format still suck. The pacing is so fast when what the story really needs is to take *time*. Slow down. Maybe even let a character pov last the whole chapter

I'm not a romance hater, but man, is this boring. This book is finding new ways to piss me off every other page.

Dude I can't handle this..this book is gonna kill me. why is the dialogue so fucking bad. You cannot serious have just typed the "it was verrry obvious..." in an actual published book. Use italics. What the hell.

and now...we are getting some action, thank fuck, but the dialogue...still sucks...I will say, I love Reath, and have little to no opinion on any of the other characters

so it was actually 59 pages last night

This was like hours ago I kinda stopped reading cause it got worse...? Uh oh? At least there's some action but lord..

Not sure how I feel about the writing style I can't lie...also the plot? Nowhere to be found. Granted I am only 1 chapter in but it hasn't hooked me yet, and it had a prologue and first chapter to do that.

Dude I really wish I had a physical copy of this I'm so upset