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Andi
is 34% done
Interesting case where any stylism to the prose, any flourishes at all, would greatly improve this simple quest story and short book. This is dry and has less flavor than a math textbook. Sucks, because even though this first third has been way too slow, there's aspects that are truly interesting, and now we're on a medieval pilgrimage, a special interest of mine. Hoping for planted story seeds to bear fruit soon
— May 27, 2026 11:11PM
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Andi
is 64% done
"He wanted to survive, more than anything, and he had just put himself at risk for her. Because he loved her, and despite it all, she loved him too." Whyyyy would you spell this out! Just as I was getting into this story, this author can't help but show her hand and overwrite and remove all doubt in A GOD OF LIES. Trust the audience, let it stay uncertain, but nope. The writing is like this constantly, so insecure
— May 29, 2026 11:03AM
